Cecilia Crasto
commented:
Frank this is a great example of an Haiku or three line poetry, check onto Prolific Press they are accepting submissions for their next journal, and enter the above as a 3 line poem... you have a natural talent, good luck!
Christopher Russon
commented:
A a good description of the frailty of life.nice one Frank.
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Feb 21, 2018 at 8:43am
Nicely written
Chris Newman
commented on May 01, 2018 at 5:24am
Christopher's comments are mine exactly.
Frank Hornby .
commented on May 02, 2018 at 11:31am
Thanks everyone for your positive comments....ðŸ‘ðŸ»....I was just observing autumn leaves swirling around the ground........dead....but still with some life to give......
A previous user
commented on Dec 11, 2018 at 3:27pm
This one's a bit of a scary thought. Take it easy Frank. Keep them coming :)
Michael Wise
commented on Dec 11, 2018 at 4:01pm
Interesting. I say that because this is what I was writing about just yesterday. I am in the middle of a poem, and actually used the word "decay" in a psychological/spiritual context. I see this is from last year, but still we're on a similar wavelength. Very moody piece that I can relate to, because I sense much more going on here than just trees and leaves.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Feb 25, 2019 at 10:54pm
Thank you Michael...I'm glad this poem stirred your imagination....