Cecilia Crasto
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A beautiful poem, loved ones pass on but they are always watching over us, that's how I feel.
Frank Hornby .
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Thanks Cecilia, .....as I sat there that day many years ago, I really did feel my mothers presence....as if she was telling me..."frank I'm ok.".....
Christopher Russon
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Nice poem Frank.I can relate to this poem.
Maria Williams
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A sad time Frank when one loses a loved one, but I feel that they are always near watching over us. Your poem is beautiful.
Frank Hornby .
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Thanks Maria...............my mum was beautiful...xx..
Frank Hornby .
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....thanks Chris....ðŸ‘ðŸ»
D'Vina Dietrich
commented on Oct 01, 2017 at 3:06pm
Wow... I felt this one. My mom passed only a year ago, its terrible... This one hit me in my heart.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Oct 02, 2017 at 9:35am
Thanks D'Vina.....your mum will always be watching, and protecting you....as she always did..that's what mums do.....thanks again D'Vina....
D'Vina Dietrich
commented on Oct 03, 2017 at 3:54am
Your welcome. &' The same goes for you. (:
Roxanne Dubarry
commented on Oct 06, 2017 at 3:30pm
Thanks for wishing me a happy birthday! Loved Maybe. It is a humorous poem!
ann parks
commented on Oct 19, 2017 at 11:11am
Brilliant......
Frank Hornby .
commented on Oct 19, 2017 at 12:44pm
Thanks Roxanne, Ann.....glad you liked my poem ladies....really appreciate you comments....thanks again..
A previous user
commented on Feb 21, 2018 at 8:52pm
That's really lovely, I can't decide if the mums dead and it's a memory or if the character is dead and seeing his past? Either way, it brought a tear to my eye. :)
Frank Hornby .
commented on Feb 22, 2018 at 9:30am
Thanks for the comment PTSD X......Yeah..it was about a weird feeling I experienced while sitting in a local park that my mother used to take me when I was just a little boy......I still like to go there sometimes, and feel her presence..........she died in 1978 ....thanks again...