A previous user
commented:
Rather sweet, thankyou for that
A previous user
commented:
I have one about kissing
Michael Wise
commented:
Love this. Love and longing awakened, or reawakened.
Taha Hassan
commented on Oct 25, 2017 at 4:15am
..... and then "within seconds her world shattered" .... -T
D'Vina Dietrich
commented on Oct 26, 2017 at 3:58am
Nice write
Christopher Russon
commented on Nov 18, 2018 at 4:09pm
Beautiful poem.sweet indeed.Suzie