Christopher Russon
commented:
Really lovely poetic feel to your words.well written
Evelyn/Eve Jones-Hall
commented:
Hello! Try wriiting more Free Verse, instead. I started out writing rhyme, but have never looked back! I only write rhyme when I write children's poems. Keep writing!
Tony Anderson
commented:
Great and beautiful poem
Amy krywiuk
commented:
Gives hope to life, and can be took into different aspects of life
Barry Hurry
commented:
A lovely poem. It makes me think of the tender and loving time spent when I first met my Eileen.
Godfrey Georges
commented:
very nice...sensuous