Bird
poem by:
D'Vina Dietrich
Written
on Mar 09, 2015
A Bird with a broken wing. The others flew away, Yet he's there, alone. The Others knew it was coming. Gave up on Him. Yet they were a Flock. Weren't they always suppose to be? Poor Bird all alone, No one to save him. He can't soar the skies Broken and alone. Every love the Bird had Revoked, gone, forever... Slowly he gives up, Lets fate settle in. They'll never be back. At this point death never sounded better. A Bird with a shattered heart.
Tags: sad, metaphor, depressing, deep, pain, happy, encouraging, hope,
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A previous user commented:
Sounds like you lost some friends or people you cared about. It hurts to lose but sometimes it's the only way to grow and heal.Your true friends will be back in the spring.
Lef Turner
commented:
it's a good poem. sad but good.
Melissa Marker
commented:
I love this....
Christopher Russon
commented:
Good and touching poem.well written
Maria Williams
commented:
We have a lot of different birds coming into our garden, and over the years I've managed to save a few who were shunned by the others. I can identify to this, I often wonder what goes through the poor little birds head. Well written
Frank Hornby .
commented on Oct 24, 2017 at 6:15pm
....another creature in trouble....I'm a sucker for rescuing birds, fixing them...then releasing into the wild....lovely feeling...lovely poem..
Taha Hassan
commented on Oct 26, 2017 at 2:27am
Your poems reflect what I'm feeling, D'vina .... Thank you. -T
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Feb 05, 2018 at 7:23am
so sad but i can relate it to betrays
Epolfi Ticance
commented on Jan 08, 2020 at 5:56am
awesome poem. last line really hit home
Justin McElveen
commented on Sep 01, 2021 at 2:12am
This is a great poem! Very deep and the hidden meaning is absolutely gut wrenching. I love this!
