mr. chap
commented:
Incredible. I want more poems to engage people not with the rhymes but the atmosphere. You can make poems like this, you just need some novel techniques,but it truly creates something unique. Not to say that rhyming is bad. I do a lot of rhyming poems myself actually. I'm just saying that no rhyming makes something very special.
pat hoban
commented:
a real piece of art thanks
Roxanne Dubarry
commented:
He is both a user and an abuser. If you can exit the relationship, do so as soon as possible! Say a prayer to God for deliverance!