Elizabeth Ladji
commented:
I get this one, I know the feeling. Good poem.
Estes Dotani
commented:
The view you've expressed is judgment, but you have not considered the higher point of trust. Trust has no up, down or past. It's simple truth without caveats. Let us bury that giving us unhappiness. Save an angel of joy.
Royce B
commented:
Nothing tears one down like losing a friend. Very relatable, very solemn. I hope you get through it.
louise bridges
commented:
this is the first of this type of poem I like. intrigued to what you would write if you made it longer :0)