A previous user
commented on Feb 25, 2018 at 9:48am
Hmmm, A story of metamorphosis. "A sacred Clown"... Is this what he wanted? how he views himself or how others view him? That's the only part I think didn't really fit. Maybe you're talking about Kanye West? or Donald Trump? Maybe even a comedian? Or maybe the fool of a relationship that has ended?... Sorry Smokey, I really can't tell what the end is about. Good poem though. I enjoyed it :)
R.T. Aquinas
commented on Feb 25, 2018 at 9:53am
I enjoyed the poem, but got a little confused about the sacred clown.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Feb 25, 2018 at 1:35pm
Lovely poem Smokey........I used to love (still do)....the Sioux, Apache natives of North America.......hated them being exploited by the early white settlers......✌ðŸ»...
Smokey Wraith
commented on Feb 25, 2018 at 4:38pm
To those confused about the sacred clown part. Do a little research on Heyokas and their relationships with the Thunderbirds that's what this poems about
A previous user
commented on Feb 25, 2018 at 6:49pm
OMG, Why did I not know about these people? I love how much you can learn by reading poetry. Thank you, guys. I think I might be a hayoka. I'm definately a clown. Either way, I just found my new user name. PTSD is so Cliche.
James Farley
commented on Mar 24, 2018 at 11:53pm
Interesting
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Mar 26, 2018 at 5:33am
awesome poem
Yuki Kim
commented on Mar 28, 2018 at 7:28am
Awesome!
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Mar 29, 2018 at 5:09am
nice use of expressions
A previous user
commented on Apr 18, 2019 at 1:11pm
Not enough people being hit by lightning these days ;)
Denny Cook Holmes
commented on Nov 17, 2019 at 8:15pm
I like this poem a lot although I would tag it sacred imagery rather than dark. Very nice thank you