Cecilia Crasto
commented on Oct 29, 2017 at 12:03am
It took a while to get what you are expressing in this little verse, not sure if my interpretation corresponds with yours, but it is excellent Chris.
Chris Cleverly
commented on Nov 02, 2017 at 10:34pm
Thank you very much Cecilia, it is always nice to read your comments and feedback.
I could explain about the very essence of this poem, dissecting and laying out the bare and honest intent of its words but..........that's no fun is it ;)
Ari J
commented on Jan 19, 2018 at 9:31pm
Love this
Chris Cleverly
commented on Jan 19, 2018 at 10:25pm
Thank you Ari J
Dawn
commented on May 22, 2019 at 5:35am
Definitely imagery at its best. A dark and detailed brevity piece that I thought was engaging and intelligent.
Chris Cleverly
commented on May 24, 2019 at 7:17am
Thank you for taking the time to read and reflect on this poem Dawn. Very much appreciated indeed.