WITHOUT YOU

poem by: Nicho Mose
Written on Feb 25, 2017

Copyright © 2016.


Falling...
In upright position
Your seemingly solid character
Yanked from under my big feet
I'm forever long alone: in two minutes

My eyes now opened
In shock: still falling, slowly though
Consciously melancholy, thinking back,
Yet completely ignorant of:
Who? Why? When? Why? Where am I ever going to land?
These strong feet and stand tall again:
Without you?

 

Tags: sad, love, deep, confused, hope,

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Geoffrey Brewer commented:
Expressive metaphors used to good effect.
Nicho Mose commented:

Nicho Mose commented:
Ah...the confusion created by falling... Thanks.
Maria Williams commented:
Ahhh, the highs and lows of LOVE, soaring one day, crumbling the next. You have a way with words.Falling...in upright position, brilliant.
Nicho Mose commented:
writing is only half...the other half is: sharing. Thanks!
Cecilia Crasto commented:
And I hope you continue to share your talent...marvelous.
Edward shields commented:
Deep & strange.
Paris Marceau commented:
Very short and sweet, this poem is quite deep and makes me feel a little sad when I read it. Well done.
Robert Kohlhammer commented:
I can imagine this being read out aloud and gaining recognition.

 

 

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