Traffic Bustle
poem by:
Q. Ramirez
Written
on Jan 24, 2017
Oh the traffic bustle Oh the hustle oh the hustle Oh the traffic woes Those who travel would know So many many cars The stop and go The hurry up and get in behind The lane in front of you The stop or whoo the screech of brakes And then again you go However near or far The coming the going From morning til evening The hating to driving Into the bustle of traffic Such hustle commuting on concrete-asphalt tar No matter how near or how far Too too many cars
Tags: humor, anger,
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Christopher Russon commented:
Lovely poem far too many cars where I live in Birmingham .England.
Arch Angel
commented:
The imagery is good. But let's become more creative with words and be less logical in poetry.
Arch Angel
commented:
What I mean by be more creative is you can add more figurative language to make this piece more poetic.
Arch Angel
commented:
What I mean by be more creative is you can add more figurative language to make this piece more poetic.
