Annie Kirby
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Charming, I wish I felt this way about love!
Dreaming an everlasting dream
Believing in everlasting lies
Hoping to be someone
To somebody when everyone
Is nobody special.
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That's just it, Annie. Love, just like happiness, is always out there (somewhere). We have to recognize it in ourselves before we can share it with someone else. That last line, "love is me and you" is a generalization of all mankind, not myself and another individual. When relationships end up in complete heartache and worse, i don't believe true love had been achieved (or not maintained if it had been achieved initially). I'm still in a seeking mode for many of the things I write about; something to look forward to, and not yet achieved. Hope this explanation makes sense. Everyone deserves to be treated with special treatment because each and every person in special in his or her own way. Matching such traits with another person is the difficult part of the equation.
Quiana Beco
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This poem was amazing. Love is all that
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Thanks Quiana
Cecilia Crasto
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As they say; love makes the world go around...all we need is love, inspiration for so many songs, stories and poems...well written.
Steve Jones
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So true and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
Christopher Russon
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Lovely poem.love goes along way.
Every one needs love.
zamiya scott
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your poem is very I wish I can write like that zamiya scott.
zamiya scott
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your poem is very good I wish I can write like that zamiya scott.
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Thank You for your awesome feedback everyone! May the beautiful presence of love enrich all of your lives :)
MDVESSEL Joy Divine
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Very true and encouraging. Thanks for posting this poem I truly enjoyed it.
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Thanks Joydivine. Glad you enjoyed this poem.
Ja Ja
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Lovely poem. Thank you