Day To Say Dealings

poem by: Quiana Beco
Written on Oct 21, 2016

The weathers foggy just like my mind
I have a whole lot of obstacles hitting me all at one time
It makes me want to run 
But I know I can't escape
It would feel much better 
If I had someone who could relate
I'm sure God wouldn't put upon me 
Nothing I couldn't bare
But these problems I'm going through 
I wish he could have spared
From love, drugs, family friends and necessities
Just to name a few
Except for drugs 
Without the rest 
What would there be left to do?

 

Tags: deep, confused, pain,

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Annie Kirby commented:
Love this, your rhythm is great! Something Iam awful at, if one of my poems rhythm it is a lucky accident!
Cecilia Crasto commented:
It is important to have structure and purpose in our lives...well written poem.
commented:
Good poem, concise and to the point. Tough times help mold who we become; at times it seems like there is no end to the madness, but better days are ahead. I won't pretend to know the depth of your pain, but I know how impossible my life has seemed at times, and things can and will get better. Try to hold on to hope on this journey called life.
A previous user commented:
Uniformed your words so creative love how you wrote your words cool
zamiya scott commented:
Like your poem, everyone has to go through, in order to become strong.
Christopher Russon commented:
Many people overcome obstacles in life and become stronger for it. Well written poem.
MDVESSEL Joy Divine commented:
Beautifully put, I can totally relate to this poem, very true and inspiring to say the least
Roxanne Dubarry commented:
There is always a ray of hope at the end of a darkened tunnel. We refer to him as Jesus Christ, who is the light of the world. Trials and temptations are a part of our earthly life. We can be over comers in his holy name!

 

 

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