Cecilia Crasto
commented:
So very true and so well written.
Q. Ramirez
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Very well rhymed, one of my favorite books "The Odyssey" of Odysseus. Do you have more poems?
Elizabeth Miller
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So true to the motion of a woman.
Christopher Russon
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Well written poem.
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Great poem. Especially like the last line; sums it all up nicely.
Ann Sdono
commented:
Very nice, and true.
Fauxcroft wade
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Nicely written
Edward shields
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Siren's women can suck.
Louise Wyatt
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Thoroughly enjoyed this. Very thought provoking!
Geoffrey Brewer
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Amazing how these archetypal classical stories still have power even when the theme is turned on its head, You have given it a clever and effective twist.