Entitlement Poet
Do I write a masterpiece tonight, Or draft a complete piece of crap? Do I talk about a bird taking flight, Or the challenge of sleep via c-pap? Regardless of whatever slop I put out, Someone will surely take time to applaud. No matter what my rhymes are really about, Hidden meanings, concise or quite broad. Typing quickly, when I try to express, Observations to my liking are used. Fickle statements made hoping to impress, Harsh opinions are blatantly excused!
Tags: humor, rhyme,
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Shanta commented:
Yes, to humor and rhyme - the core is missing!
Christopher Russon
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Many poems may seem obscure.And deep.
The hidden meaning is the key To understanding
All part of the art.
ephraim crud
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Methinks you need to think more about your subject matter afore putting pen to paper. Again, some good word-use, but.....
Annie Kirby
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Love this and so true! I write my best poem ever, a masterpiece and nobody gives it a look. I write a silly little nothing about love and lust and everyone reads it and tells me how wonderful I am.
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Annie, THANK YOU!!!!!! You have completely recognized the sarcasm which was intended for this writing. I've seen what you have described occur; sometimes something so awful is applauded as the greatest, and something quite wonderful becomes overlooked. You have made my day with your understanding of this writing. Thanks again!
Geoffrey Brewer
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Tchakivski was very dismissive of his 'Nutcracker' composition, but it came to be one of his most popular pieces.
Geoffrey Brewer
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I share some of your frustration at the incongruous and seeming perverse mismatches between poems and comments. You might check my poem: 'Emotional Attraction' for similar observations.
