What I Loved About You

poem by: Leanne Royle
Written on Jul 28, 2016 

Your long brown lucious hair, 
as way the wind whisped it away.
your big inquisitive green eyes,
as you glared at me that way.
the plumped lip smile,
that captured my dreary soul.
youre tight wrinkled nose,
when i did something you didnt condone.
your amazing joyful laugh,
when i told you a funny joke.
it was something i felt in my heart,
When you said those words you spoke.
the way you placed your arms around me
to take away my stress.
and the way youd hold me in the mornings, 
when i needed to get dressed.
its the little quirky things youd do,
which make it hard for me to forget.
even through everything that when on,
im really glad we met!

 

Tags: happy, love, wishful,

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Ricky Coppinger commented:
:)nice
Lewis Smith commented:
I like your last 5 lines. It's makes me feel like there was more going on than led to believe. Nice work
Lewis Smith commented:
I like your last 5 lines. It's makes me feel like there was more going on than led to believe. Nice work
Christopher Russon commented:
Very romantic.Nice poem.
Edward shields commented:
Would be a great dream!

 

 

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