Delve Deeper
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Sadly beautiful.... yet simple Bravo.... but there is always hope whether in the thought there may be a heaven ( in the sense you can't disprove what you can't prove) or something will take the pain away from them both. no matter how small the light there is always hope.... take the stars they light the whole night sky and they're tiny some of them.
Chris Cleverly
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Thank you for your feedback on the poem and the thought gone into your comments afterwood, your positive outlook is prodigious.
Delve Deeper
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:) well... I don't know about all that.... it's just a small truth that get's lost in times of despair and grief.... in life there is always good and bad can't have one without the other... so it becomes a matter of probability something good is bound to happen sooner than later. ;)
Cecilia Crasto
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I'd like to think that there is a heaven, otherwise the outlook seems pretty bleak and life... meaningless. Well done, beautiful words.
Chris Cleverly
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Thankyou Cecilia.
Maybe it is for those reasons you wrote that the idea of a heaven was created, Imagine for an instant how final death is if you dont believe in a heaven
Christopher Russon
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Heaven is based on hope then hope becomes faith the assurance of
all expectations.good poem.
Chris Cleverly
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Thankyou for your comment Christopher. Allways welcome - nice insight too
Muk -
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So simple but so real, really relatable
Chris Cleverly
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Thank you for your comment Muk, appreciated
Allison Green
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Short and yet it stirred so many different emotions. Tragically beautiful.
Chris Cleverly
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Thankyou for reading and for your feedback Allison
Ja Ja
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Life goes on, she waits
Chris Cleverly
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Thank you Ja Ja for reading and taking the time to reply