Stay With Me

poem by: Wendy Phelan
Written on Oct 24, 2015

What I feel for you is perfect,
Alas, my love I'm not
There's more to me than your eyes can see
Priceless, without cost
Our love is absolute, always meant to be,
I want to get lost in your eyes
Go wherever love will send me
I gladly surrender to your charms
Let the satisfaction be too much
I want to die in your tender arms
To be re-awakened by your touch
You are a memory, a dream, a familiar soul
Quickening the beat of my famished heart
Please stay with me until we are tired and old
Our spirits farewell only flesh, we'll never part
We'll remain happy, sated, wild and free
Stay with me my darling for it's always you for me
So we haven't been to heaven yet? I think I disagree!

 

Tags: happy, love, rhyme, inspirational, deep,

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Timothy Nelson commented:
Nice rhyme and coloring. Your words carried me through the nourishing that it seemed your heart desired. Good story line. "Clarksdalepoet"
Purple Couch commented:
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Christopher Russon commented:
Lovely words l want to get lost in your eyes
Tony Anderson commented:
Wonderfully expressive write
Wendy Phelan commented:
Thank you for your feedback, I am chuffed to be honest. Timothy you read something I might not have paid enough attention to and Clarksdalepoet, wow, that's something I'll remain humbled by. I loved your comments, Christopher and Tony, thank you.
Ja Ja commented:
Love is perfection. Thank you for sharing these thoughts
Ja Ja commented:
Love is perfection. Thank you for sharing these thoughts

 

 

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