Derek Vincent
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It speaks the life of my butterfly until my Christie left me... We understood eachther until misunderstanding society broke us fucking apart! You better shape up to grow up or be beat down to break down... We are all children in this dolls house...
Micaela Dawn
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I dont know how i should take that Derek...
kevin allen
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Imagine u r on a stage in front of everyone in the world..Hold out ur hand with ur palm facing u..fold ur pink and thumb..u should show the number 3..now fold the fingers beside ur pinky and thumb..now u should have the number 1..and which finger is left up? That goes to the person who hurt you....
louise bridges
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its hard to cope with depression and it feels lonelier sometimes with the people closest to us sometimes than when we are alone. putting on a brave face for their comfort and also to keep us safe from rejection. crying is healthy
Micaela Dawn
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Thank you Aiysha and Kevin!
Christopher Russon
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This is a needed poem that had to be approached
No one understands depression.the signs are not always easy to see.
Good write.