Stilletto Blues
poem by:
Ann Parks
Written
on Sep 22, 2014
Click clack click clack Like Hank I walk the floor Tick tock tick tock I really do abhor this useless staring at your chair oh how I ache to see you there but must not peep near where you are for reason shouts "he went too far! this man you love does not love you." As I ask weeping what to do. Your soft voice was a lamb in spring the value of it's words: nothing.
Tags: sad, love, rhyme,
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ann parks commented:
Hank Williams sang the line "you'll walk the floor the way I do" in his song :your cheating heart.
Jerry Bolton
commented:
Love gone wrong. Many time the parting is harder on one than the other. The only thing I can tell you is listen to the voice . . .
Rick Wheeler
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Love gone wrong, happens
Michael Haile
commented:
Hello Ann, I like your poem and like the words but from what I have learned ..........No advice is good advice.........If this about you? Only you can decide what is in your heart..........Michael
wanda Sheldrick
commented:
I love this poem
Sharron Lazechko
commented:
Very nicely written. I love the beginning as it opens the mind to what follows. Beautifully done.
Martyn Grindrod
commented:
Fine poem
Christopher Russon
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Sad when love is a one way street.Lovely poem Ann.
Robert Kohlhammer
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Both a historical and original read, words that made me sit to attention.
Frank Hornby .
commented on Sep 18, 2017 at 2:33pm
Good little poem...
