Silent Movie

poem by: Jazz Force
Written on Nov 27, 2017

Sitting with her emerald fan
Silver sequin hair
She says nothing 
Of intentions 

A candlelit room
Curtains
Table
Chair 

Silent lady
A silent movie dream
Are you just a projection
On my silver screen? 

 

Tags: Rhyme, Metaphor, Imagery,

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Chris Cleverly commented on Nov 27, 2017 at 2:20am
Nice poem, the way you broke up the flow makes for a good read.
Frank byrne commented on Nov 27, 2017 at 1:00pm
Intriguing poem.......like it....
Christopher Russon commented on Dec 02, 2017 at 5:24pm
Love this poem.Excelent little poem.
Gabriela Fuentes commented on Dec 05, 2017 at 11:21pm
short and perfect
Frank byrne commented on Dec 07, 2017 at 10:17am
....on my second reading....it's garbage just like the others.........
Jazz Force commented on Dec 07, 2017 at 3:53pm
Thanks Frank!
JG Collins commented on Dec 09, 2017 at 10:23pm
anthropomorphic, wow big word. Do you even know what it means? BTW, you wright fluffy kind of like a bag of feathers.
JG Collins commented on Dec 11, 2017 at 2:22am
Hi Fluffy, Written anymore bag full of feather poems. Big fluffy but light weight. Thanks for reading my work. I suggest you read all of them, you might learn something.😜 JG
JG Collins commented on Dec 11, 2017 at 5:42pm
Hi Fluffy Those lines you quoted are classics. Clearly you’re just a troll. My genious clearly is not understood by you. JG

 

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