Waiting

poem by: Jazz Force
Written on Nov 26, 2017

Where minutes turn to hours 
Hours into days
Sitting on the train platform bench 
Fragmented
Invisible 

Below chaotic clusters 
Of font people
Waiting for the next event
Counting "likes" 
With laser beam eyes 
On shared screens
I am them

 

Tags: Metaphor, Depressing, Dark, Imagery,

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Frank byrne commented on Dec 07, 2017 at 2:54pm
In your own words.....depressing....yawn..zzzz.
Jazz Force commented on Dec 08, 2017 at 1:21am
Tags are idiotic!
Jazz Force commented on Dec 08, 2017 at 1:31am
Look at it as a sleep aid..
Frank byrne commented on Dec 08, 2017 at 12:36pm
....your words are a cure for insomnia.......zzzzz....

 

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