You kind of gave me something

poem by: Gabriela Fuentes
Written on Nov 18, 2017

You kind of gave me something 
I tried to give it back 
We kind of had passion 
We couldn’t hold it back 
I gave you too many 
Too much 
You gave me
Too little 
and no love 
Kind off fool 
Fool at all 
Kind of messy 
Won’t wish for you 
I wish me the best 
I kind of believed my own lies
And honey that’s nothing, nothing wow 
Kind of try to think not about 
But you mess with heart once in a while 
Can we not talk about?
Can we leave without?
Can we start now?
Words way messy 
No they don’t 
The lies are 
Indeed we hide 
No head, stop it right there 
Shall we never ever? 
Leave it there 
Leave it there
Honey I don’t want more mess
Look around 
What do see 
Another mess I made out of me 
Mind goes 
Life goes 
Tried to loose my soul 
You helped 
Oh no thanks
I kind of don’t want me anymore 
But is it true 
Is it gold?
Come honey sit down 
Listen neither do I 
But I stopped and looked at signs they told me 
I freaked 
I smiled
I turned into whom I was 
The truest, the better, the search or whomever 
Thinks and blinks 
Whom I believed?
You kind of gave me something I rather not keep. 


Tags: Pain, Hate, Abstract, Confused, Depressing, Metaphor, Anger, Beat, Love, Sad, Weird, Deep,

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Janet Vick commented on Nov 20, 2017 at 11:21am
I can feel the confusion and anger in these words. Someone you wanted to believe but in the end, couldn't... Janet
Frank byrne commented on Nov 20, 2017 at 1:26pm
Sounds like you really have been hurt......try to not get depressed.....put hurt into verse....and it won't get worse...
Christopher Russon commented on Dec 03, 2017 at 10:35am
It seems you needed to exspress your feelings.Well written poem .
Jazz Force commented on Dec 08, 2017 at 1:26am
I like the emotions


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