commented on Nov 10, 2017 at 6:30pm
Sometimes ..... we have to grow up ... even when we dont want to ..... sometimes ... the world needs us to grow up before it shatters all around us ... Our world needs us ... It needs our life .... it needs our undying effort .... it needs us to forget everything we want and start working for the things our world wants. Funnily enough, it's entirely up to you to be like almost everyone else around you and chase your own dreams, or be the person this world needs, and forget yourself. -T
commented on Nov 14, 2017 at 8:50pm
Only 14 certainly touches the heart strings in reading and tells of the hardships endured or not endured. Tragedy eats away at us and doesn't care about the age or what is left behind. Some can move on and some stay in possession of what can never be but continue longing for it. Only to end up lost to the present. A read that is too real in this world... Janet
commented on Dec 25, 2017 at 10:22pm
Being a youth today brings many challenges as we can see in your poem.
Many youth grow up too soon .or should I say forced to grow up.Lovely write Nemees.
commented on Jan 28, 2018 at 2:57pm
....sad poem..you have you're whole life ahead of you...live it...