Thank You

poem by: George McLaren
Written on Jan 10, 2014

You
Stabbed me
In the back.

But
Thank you.

At least
You left
The knife in.

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A previous user commented:

Yeah right? Just left you to bleed a little bit slower. It wouldn't be fun any other way

mr. chap commented:

Very...unique. Like how unique it is. Kinda reminds me of a poem I made recently. Very few stanzas. No ryming words. Yep. Kinda like "All In My Head" Except your stanzas are shorter and only 3 while I have 4. I like how somebody once made an i except with the poets own personal fingerprint for the dot above and it got INSTANT critical praise. XD

Fauxcroft wade commented:

love this

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