The Wave Poet
commented on Feb 15, 2018 at 6:03pm
I like how the anger and fear are transmitted. This poem really reflects the pain and frustration. Really liked it.
Ms. Micki
commented on Feb 17, 2018 at 4:15am
This floating rock in space and time belongs to all those called humans
Man tries to draw slippery geographic lines disappearing in political agendas time
when one day we might unite
A time when creatures afar remind us who we are
Beautifully sensitive human lights in need of acceptance love and compassion for all...
A previous user
commented on Feb 17, 2018 at 2:08pm
I look at my neighbour and see that he looks at his other neighbours this way. He's terrified of the stories yet never had anything bad happen to him or his neighbourhood. It really shows how information and the spread of propaganda can be used to incite emotion. Even I feel that way sometimes and I don't know why logic takes over and I'm sound of mind again. to cut to the chase, it shows how humans deal with differences in a nutshell. I can relate and I know most in America right now can or knows people that can. Good piece of writing that. Well done.
Dinesh Chauhan
commented on Feb 18, 2018 at 2:01pm
Nicely written
Frank Hornby .
commented on Mar 19, 2018 at 8:56am
Thanks everyone for taking the time to read, and comment....ðŸ‘ðŸ»âœŒï¸