This One's for you

poem by: Freesa Khan
Written on Jan 08, 2014


Broken, criticized, and humiliated,
I figured my confidence had now faded.
I tried and tried to find a way,
where people might understand what I want to say!

Thank you everyone for all your praise,
my confidence is boosted and i hope it stays.
You helped me have faith in my writing,
and thanks to you I'm still fighting.

So to all the wonderful friends I've made,
Thank you so much, I'm glad I stayed.
You all are amazing, and I'm glad I met you,
You're all very great in all that you do.
 

 

Tags: happy, love, encouraging,

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greg woods commented:
Well done Frees, a beautiful friendship poem, and I sense that it's very much in the present moment, a great compliment to all from you.
George McLaren commented:
Lovely poem, Freesa. Very heartfelt and heart tugging. Lovely. George
Daniel Voges commented:
Again well written, I can't help but feel there's a fragile person with a great talent.
Janet Vick commented:
Your writing is straight forward full of imagery. The reader feels a part of the words as you express emotions. Take care. Janet

 

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