TWICE

poem by: Ja Ja
Written on Feb 24, 2017

Wouldnâ€™t it be nice
If we could live twice
So when the first one is done
We do the next one, for fun
WIZDUMBs by JA 91

Tags: happy, humor, rhyme, inspirational, encouraging,

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A previous user commented:

I like it. My kind of thing. Simple. To the point. good poem Check out my, Wishing Machine.

Christopher Russon commented:

Short but very good thought provoking.

Cecilia Crasto commented:

Better to get it over and done with, the next one could be worse than the first! captivating.

Maria Williams commented:

I like your style, to the point but makes one ponder.

James Waide commented:

Excellent! Short, sweet and delicious!

Geoffrey Brewer commented:

Nice and concise. But furthermore: If this life is the penultimate one Why wait for the next to have some fun And If it's a singularity Let's not waste our share of joviality

Frank Hornby . commented:

It certainly would be nice........where do I sign up?........

Wendy Phelan commented:

Yes, it would be nice x

Wendy Phelan commented:

Oh Yeah! Wouldn't it be great! Short and sweet.

Piya Paul Mudgal commented:

Two lives in one birth??? Interesting!!!

Rishamjot k Virk commented on Oct 29, 2017 at 1:45am

Very motivational thought keep it up great work

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