Traffic Bustle

poem by: Q. Ramirez
Written on Jan 24, 2017

Oh the traffic bustle
Oh the hustle oh the hustle
Oh the traffic woes
Those who travel would know
So many many cars
The stop and go
The hurry up and get in behind
The lane in front of you
The stop or whoo the screech of brakes
And then again you go
However near or far
The coming the going
From morning til evening
The hating to driving
Into the bustle of traffic
Such hustle commuting on concrete-asphalt tar
No matter how near or how far
Too too many cars

 

Tags: humor, anger,

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Christopher Russon commented:
Lovely poem far too many cars where I live in Birmingham .England.
Arch Angel commented:
The imagery is good. But let's become more creative with words and be less logical in poetry.
Arch Angel commented:
What I mean by be more creative is you can add more figurative language to make this piece more poetic.
Arch Angel commented:
What I mean by be more creative is you can add more figurative language to make this piece more poetic.

 

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