Christopher Russon
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Nice poem.remind me of a song I heard on the sixtys
It's good news week bye Hedgehoppers anonymous.
Piya Paul Mudgal
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Serene and surreal
Cecilia Crasto
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We need more people like you, to care about the preservation of this planet, seems like a losing battle, good work.
ann parks
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What on earth is "ablivise".... (this world abblivise to nature)perhaps you mean oblivious...
Edward shields
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Thanks for your comment. I don't mind criticism, it helps me to try and write bettor poetry. Obviously you can't!!!
Arch Angel
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I think organization will make this piece more linguistic. There are some spelling errors. What is ablivious anyways? Perhaps you mean oblivious?
A previous user
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Not concerned with spelling. Its the message recieved. We should show this rock we live on some respect. I like the message
Maria Williams
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I like this poem, very well written
Nicho Mose
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Great word. most times we're our own worst enemy. 9/10 of the time...
Frank Hornby .
commented on Oct 04, 2017 at 9:57pm
Mankind is the earths worst enemy.....good poem