Well written poem, life' a bitch. I can feel your pain in your poem, don't hurt yourself or other people. Put your pain on paper. Great poem.
Oh no what has happened Michael to make you so despondent, there is always someone who will listen, and you have many friends on Pondrin who read your poems and give moral support...take courage.
Good evening all. Just going through an extremely rough patch. Sometimes the harshest of feelings can be expressed in writing to act as a therapeutic release from emotional pain. Thank you for your concern, it does mean a lot to me that you care enough to comment with well wishes. I'm working my way out of this dark place of depression, if only one day at a time.
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Great poem! Do you ever think what have i done to get so much grief especially from family? Keep sharing
Powerful poem..........but please don't get sucked into the black hole....that seems to be pulling you closer.......
Thanks Frank and Ellen. Starting over with one's life at 47 years old is a tall order. Learning day by day. Lesson after lesson. Looking for the love of my life. Believe I've found her but life keeps throwing little hurdles in my way. Dark poetry is my way of releasing inner frustrations and hurt. We all deserve and desire love; There is nothing greater. Nothing.
.....hope you find peace of mind.....soon........try to create a happier poem....please..
Where there is dark there is always light that leads to New beginnings.I hope things will get better for you I am sure they will.
commented on Oct 07, 2017 at 1:39pm
A powerful poem of sadness and regret
Some things in life a very hard to forget
But we must go on no, matter what the pain
For there is a One and a Place, that we will gain
Thank you for the touching poem