Edward shields
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A previous user
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Like it. trips off the tongue nicely. good work
dan miltz
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Very good. A nice quatrain couplet. Excellent work!
Cecilia Crasto
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I totally agree, man is destroying the planet and will always do so...very good.
Christopher Russon
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Such a well written poem.and mankind is ruining the earth.
Piya Paul Mudgal
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Truly Moved. Great expression of thoughts
Scribe Granted
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Really got the point directly across, and an important message! Check out my page if you get a chance :)
Wendy Darling
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Brilliant poem, but the apostrophes are misused. Should be plural bees and butterflies, no apostrophe.
Martyn Grindrod
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Well constructed. Enjoyable
ann parks
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do you mean stopping their flow rather than there flow?
Edward shields
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Look the word flow up!!! Ann parks.
Lorris Morris
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Beautifully....written
Stephen Dobson
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Really really good
Arch Angel
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Grammatical errors can be boldy seen especially the misusage of plural forms of words.
Edward shields
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Arch Angel. Thanks for your comment. It will help me write bettor, that's why I joined this web site.
Arch Angel
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Thank you for finally understanding my evaluations on your poems, :D
Arch Angel
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Learn how to spell the word *better*.
Arch Angel
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Can you stop writing flamboyant and hateful comments on my work? Your comments on my works are very differentiated; you comment unnecessary things that are hateful and I'm just giving you feedback to make your piece more beautiful. If you think this is a hate comment again, there's something gonna happen. Please understand that evaluations and harrassments are contrary subjects.
A previous user
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Can you stop writing flamboyant and hateful comments on my work? Your comments on my works are very differentiated; you comment unnecessary things that are hateful and I'm just giving you feedback to make your piece more beautiful. If you think this is a hate comment again, there's something gonna happen. Please understand that evaluations and harrassments are contrary subjects.
Edward shields
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Arch angel. Don't cry when someone comments on your work, after you attacked their work first. My one poem got twelve comments. I've read all seven of your poems, all your poems put together only got five!!!
Geoffrey Brewer
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An nice poem - clear, well worded and constructed with an appealing message. But who are the 'We' and what are the 'lies'? The world may be changing; it always has; and we deplore some of those changes, but I doubt if Mother Nature is as fragile as you suggest.
Maria Williams
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I think whatever humans throw at it, Mother Earth will fix herself in her own time and at her own pace, and if she takes some of us along for the ride , so be it.Lol!!
I like you work though. Great expression.
Gemma Marsh
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Not bad
Frank Hornby .
commented on Oct 04, 2017 at 10:00pm
It's as if mankind is on a mission of self destruction......powerful poem Edward.....