The will to persevere
poem by:
Shane Smith
Written
on Oct 28, 2016
The yelling in your ear All the screaming that you hear, It all adds up to the objective in your mind Leaving your thoughts trapped in a bind. They say it will be alright it will be okay Yet the shouting persists another day, They push you and push you harder and hard Until you break down and fall like a house of cards. You are on the verge of letting go All your thoughts are moving slow, But you overcome and stay strong Until bad is gone and nothing is wrong.
Tags: sad, rhyme, metaphor, deep, hope,
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Christopher Russon commented:
Lovely poem.things get better with time .
At least it is nice to think so.
Josephina DeGraeve
commented:
Very strong poem and well worded.
Alejandro Tosell
commented on Oct 10, 2017 at 12:02pm
I love it...so beautiful!
