My Regrets

poem by: Ricky Totoki
Written on Oct 27, 2016

My Regrets
I regret the
fact that I 
couldn't 
help my
family
because
of my 
disability!!

I regret
the 
fact 
that
I couldn't 
get a 
good 
paying
job to
help
my 
family...
I'm a
disgrace!!!
I'm Sorry Mom
& Dad for Not
Helping You
with Things!!
I'm Sorry for
Being so
Useless!!!  © 18 hours ago, Ricky1970    family

 

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Ricky Totoki commented:
Please Give Me Your Input on My Poem?!! I'm An Amateur Disabled Poet Trying to Be a Professional!! Mahalo ALOHA!!!
Christopher Russon commented on Nov 19, 2017 at 8:53am
Lovely heartfelt poem Ricky.I hope you don't mind me just giving you some friendly advice. Don't worry too much at the moment about being professional with your poems that will come.my poems are Amateur and I am happy with that.Recently I came home from a poetry event walking home down the high st with a professional poet I said I wish I could write like you.in reply he said do not try and compare yourself with others.then he continued I have been doing this all my life.this is what I am about.I will always remember that advice.so carry on writing Ricky.all the best.happy days.

 

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