Day To Say Dealings
poem by:
Quiana Beco
Written
on Oct 21, 2016
The weathers foggy just like my mind I have a whole lot of obstacles hitting me all at one time It makes me want to run But I know I can't escape It would feel much better If I had someone who could relate I'm sure God wouldn't put upon me Nothing I couldn't bare But these problems I'm going through I wish he could have spared From love, drugs, family friends and necessities Just to name a few Except for drugs Without the rest What would there be left to do?
Tags: deep, confused, pain,
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Annie Kirby commented:
Love this, your rhythm is great! Something Iam awful at, if one of my poems rhythm it is a lucky accident!
Cecilia Crasto
commented:
It is important to have structure and purpose in our lives...well written poem.
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Good poem, concise and to the point. Tough times help mold who we become; at times it seems like there is no end to the madness, but better days are ahead. I won't pretend to know the depth of your pain, but I know how impossible my life has seemed at times, and things can and will get better. Try to hold on to hope on this journey called life.
A previous user
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Uniformed your words so creative love how you wrote your words cool
zamiya scott
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Like your poem, everyone has to go through, in order to become strong.
Christopher Russon
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Many people overcome obstacles in life and become stronger for it.
Well written poem.
MDVESSEL Joy Divine
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Beautifully put, I can totally relate to this poem, very true and inspiring to say the least
Roxanne Dubarry
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There is always a ray of hope at the end of a darkened tunnel. We refer to him as Jesus Christ, who is the light of the world. Trials and temptations are a part of our earthly life. We can be over comers in his holy name!
