Pain

poem by: Takeen Evens
Written on Oct 16, 2016 

Its unbearable,
An ancient trend,
Its not comfortable,
It torments you to the end.

Reduces strength,
Takes power,
Demolishes love,
At the very hour.

An unwanted gift,
A health stain,
No one ever wants,
The experience of Pain.

 

Tags: sad, depressing, deep, pain, dark,

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Cecilia Crasto commented:
I don't... very well written.
Christopher Russon commented:
I agree lovely poem.
Ultan Mulhern commented:
They certainly don't. That's a good poem.
Annie Kirby commented:
Invading all aspects of my time and space, of every part of me. Wonderful poem!
A previous user commented:
It touched a sad nerve great poem thanks
Chris Cleverly commented:
I really like how this reads, nice poem

 

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