Tear Drops
poem by:
Ladarius Brown
Written
on Sep 05, 2013
Tear Drops Let the rain wash my pain away. Rid me of my sin. Rid me of my despair. Oh Lord! Just take it all away! As the rain releases me into another world, I gaze upon my upon my unrealistic surroundings; hoping to reach it someday. I shed these tears as the rain drops cleanse my soul of all the filth of society; asking God to forgive me for my actions. I wipe away the tears and let the rain bring in new hope. Maybe I will come to peace with God's tears. Ladarius Brown
Tags: faith, deep, hope, wishful,
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Rachel Cartwright commented:
Hey this is a really good poem! The imagery and the emotions are really well done. I also love how you used the metaphor of the rain. Good job!
Rachel Cartwright
commented:
Oh and I really like the last 2 lines a lot.. A unique perspective.
Christopher Russon
commented on Apr 22, 2018 at 4:22pm
Heartfelt and sincere words to this poem .Well written.
