Suicide Alley

poem by: Alli Steward
Written on Jun 01, 2013

Promises-broken
Words-unspoken
Cuts-hidden
Scars-redden
Hearts-racing
Bodies-pacing
Tears-running
Parents-shunning
People-screaming
Lights-gleaming
Victims-loosing
Knuckles-bruising
All down Suicide Alley.

 

Tags: sad, depressing, pain,

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Rene Hernandez commented:
Very passionate....and honest
Alli Steward commented:
****meaning**** Promises-broken (got that because of everyone breaking promises or lying to me) Words-unspoken (got that because any time i try to reach out for help i get left while they leave) Cuts-hidden (all over my legs. sometimes wrists.) Scars-redden (i cut deeper into my scars most of the time :/ ) Hearts-racing (my heart always races when i am going crazy) Bodies-pacing (i cant help pacing back and forth) Tears-running (my tears become so elabrite that they fall heavily onto my cuts or hands) Parents-shunning (ive always had a feeling my parents had hated me..and it was true) People-screaming (thats all my mom and dad do..scream at me...then i go into my room and scream at myself.) Lights-gleaming (i wake up to bright rooms) Victims-loosing (people bullied or like me...we loose.) Knuckles-bruising (i hit walls till i brake a knuckle or they bleed..whichever comes first..) All down Suicide Alley. (all while im contemplating suicide)
Royce B commented:
Very intense and passionate.
Frank Hornby . commented:
....I'm sorry Allie....but you need medical help..........asap......your comment is a cry for help.....please ask for it...

 

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